Moving:
1. The almost fast paced intro that parallels Red Bull its self.
2. The explanation of the title of Red Bull.
3. The personal experiences relayed to the reader in the paper, such as when the author went online to visit the Red Bull Site.
Not so moving IMO:
1. The flow of the paper was not great. The sentences and paragraphs for that matter have a choppy rhythm to it.
2. Repetitive.
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