The Moving:
1. The stats offered at the beginning of the paper were cool.
2. The detail oriented description of the iPod classic.
3. Highlighting the uses of the iPod, which make it superior.
Not So Moving IMO:
1. The long conclusion.
2. Lack of a connection to the reader.
3. After a little bit, it became a very technical and programming oriented paper.
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